Stealthfire
Skin contest
In service for life, unwilling to give up.
Posts: 12
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Post by Stealthfire on Nov 29, 2006 22:36:00 GMT -5
Name: Mysticpool Gender: Female Age: 27 Moons Clan: Snagclan Position: Medicine Cat Picture: Description: Mysticpool is a black and brown tortiseshell cat. She is very long and sleek. Mysticpool has a long face and legs with a long, narrow face. She's fairly tall and has very short fur. Mysticpool and light green eyes that show her true compassion and love for her clan and her duties. Her fur is often ruffled but very clean. She has a black nose and short whiskers. Personality: This she-cat is kind and loving to all. She loves her clan and is dedicated to helping them. Mysticpool is eager to make sure that everybody is doing okay and determined to save everybody. Mysticpool is extremely dedicated to her job as a medicine cat. She hardly finds time for herself but really enjoys the short breaks that she gets. History: Mysticpool wasn't a very good at training to become a warrior. The former medicine cat could see how interested she was in the duties of a medicine cat. She decided to take her as an apprentice after Mysticpool lost both of her parents. They died at the same time from sickness. Her mother caught greencough and ended up passing it on to Mysticpool's father. He sister died at birth from the umbilical cord wrapping around her neck, so she was all alone. Other: No RP example: No
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Post by Rai on Nov 29, 2006 23:31:25 GMT -5
No, only one roleplay example is needed per person(of so I think), but I believe to be a medicine/deputy/leader, you must have your details a bit more indepth. Like maybe add another sentece or two to her history, clearing things up a bit(ex: How did her sister die? Could you explain her parents deaths a bit more? Maybe tell what the sickness/disease was please?) That is really all I ask.
Sorry if this is a little much, and in the end, I am not sure if I can even accept you for such a spot, Cloudstar might have too. Once again, sorry if I have made this difficult, both Cloudstar and Stealthfire.
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Post by Cloudstar on Nov 30, 2006 11:27:16 GMT -5
Rai is correct, for a med cat, dep or leader you need to have more details. ^^ So could you put some more in personality, description and history? Thanks ^^
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Stealthfire
Skin contest
In service for life, unwilling to give up.
Posts: 12
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Post by Stealthfire on Dec 3, 2006 16:28:21 GMT -5
Okay, if that's not enough than just tell me and I'll try to work more information in there. Really that's all I could think of for now.
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Post by Rai on Dec 4, 2006 1:05:25 GMT -5
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